Kelly, This is a very interesting application that you are trying to “pitch.” The idea is awesome, like you said we live in the 21st century, wallets should be something of the past viewable only in a museum. With that said, I think you presented very well and did not come across robotic. I think I said something earlier in another comment worrying about security of the app, but anyway great job.
I loved your idea of the new app that takes place for your wallet. I would for sure you that app from now on. You did a great job of getting your point across in your video and your message was very clear. I agree with your statement that no feedback was wrong because I don't see how any feedback can be wrong. Great Job!
I like how approachable and friendly you are in your elevator pitch. I also like how you included your feedback recap at the end of the video. Your idea reminds me of Apple Pay, but I really think carrying a physical wallet is an outdated trend. Too often wallets are lost or stolen. Credit and debit card information stored in a phone are at least password protected, and everyone always has their phone on them. It sounds like you found a pitch that works and stuck with it, good job.
Hey Kelly I like how you did everything on the same video. I just wanted to let you know that there are already big companies that are pursuing your idea. I would like to see how you would face such competition and how you plan on giving your product it's very own competitive advantage. Nice job!
Your pitch was great in both content and delivery. I agree with Allison that it was an "approachable and friendly" pitch. I agree with your premise that wallets are no longer necessary with the level that technology is at right now. I was also reminded of existing services with your pitch, but it is not a big deal if you're not looking to actually pursue your venture. It was a great idea to use to practice elevator pitches.
Kelly,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting application that you are trying to “pitch.” The idea is awesome, like you said we live in the 21st century, wallets should be something of the past viewable only in a museum. With that said, I think you presented very well and did not come across robotic. I think I said something earlier in another comment worrying about security of the app, but anyway great job.
I loved your idea of the new app that takes place for your wallet. I would for sure you that app from now on. You did a great job of getting your point across in your video and your message was very clear. I agree with your statement that no feedback was wrong because I don't see how any feedback can be wrong. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteHi Kelly,
ReplyDeleteI like how approachable and friendly you are in your elevator pitch. I also like how you included your feedback recap at the end of the video. Your idea reminds me of Apple Pay, but I really think carrying a physical wallet is an outdated trend. Too often wallets are lost or stolen. Credit and debit card information stored in a phone are at least password protected, and everyone always has their phone on them. It sounds like you found a pitch that works and stuck with it, good job.
Hey Kelly I like how you did everything on the same video. I just wanted to let you know that there are already big companies that are pursuing your idea. I would like to see how you would face such competition and how you plan on giving your product it's very own competitive advantage. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteHey Kelly!
ReplyDeleteYour pitch was great in both content and delivery. I agree with Allison that it was an "approachable and friendly" pitch. I agree with your premise that wallets are no longer necessary with the level that technology is at right now. I was also reminded of existing services with your pitch, but it is not a big deal if you're not looking to actually pursue your venture. It was a great idea to use to practice elevator pitches.